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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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I believe that parents would be the best teachers. From my everyday experience and observation. I can totally agree with the statement that parents are the best. For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.
First
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 of all, I would like to say that parents are our very
first
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 teacher.
For instance
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, children often copy their parents ‘ habits because children are sure that parents do only
right things
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the right things
. Often children
first
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 wish is to be like their mother or father. Parents are the best teachers because they wish their children a success and they do not teach them bad things.
Secondly
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, parents care for their children more than anybody else
.
Accept space
.
the
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The
 emotions and feelings between parents and
th
definite article
the
child
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 are something special that you can not find it anywhere else.
For example
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, a supportive mother would not be tired repeating over and over for her
child
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,
however
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, a teacher can do it once or twice because of limited time.
Thirdly
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, parents have
good understanding
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a good understanding
from
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of
 their children and probably know their abilities and disabilities.
As a result
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, they can find a better way to maintain their strengths and improve their weaknesses. As an example, my father knew me well and the fact that I was a shy
child
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. He always brought me to different events to make me encounter my shyness. If he had not been
awareness
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aware
 of
this
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, I would not have the
posibility
a future prospect or potential
possibility
possibilities
 to modify it. In conclusion, I believe that parents are the best teachers for their children.
That is
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 because they are the
first
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 one whom a
child
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 can follow, and because they care for their children more than anyone else, and because they are aware of their children features.
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