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most countries offer two form of education ystems from which parents select the form of schooling which most suits their own child, compare and contrast state -run and private owned schools in your country

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There are two forms of the
Education
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 system in most nations. The run by the private and government sectors, in which parents can choose the type of schooling that will suit their child. Compare and contrast to the government sector and the private sector schools in your country. From my perspective,
education
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 is the essential achievement a parent can give to the children.
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 with. The state-run
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 is operated and manage by the state
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 is the form of
education
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 in which free
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 are provided to every citizen.
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 is beneficial to those families who are at low levels of income because they can send the children for schooling with more benefits. Like a full tuition fee, free
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 accessories and sometimes pocket money allowance are
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 provided.
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, the private-owned schools is usually owned by some private sectors.
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 is a form of educational institution in which the children enrolled are not free
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they have to pay for everything. Some parents choose
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 form of educational institution because the students are limited in each classroom as compared to the state –run
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. Aside from that, the private-owned
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, parents can choose where to send their children, even if they are not a resident in that community. The Enrollees controlled, resulting in a less crowded environment. As the result, the teacher can give the learner an excellent information and good quality of
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. I conclude that the two forms of the learning system which is the private and government sectors have a considerable difference,
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 the parents can choose wisely where to send their children.
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