At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Currently, some countries have

considerably higher proportion

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a considerably higher proportion

of young people in comparison with the quantity of senior citizens. In my opinion, I consider that

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situation can impart more advantages as opposed to any drawbacks it might bring. Despite the disadvantages below, I believe that the countries which include larger number of youngsters can gain a lot of tangible benefits.

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, younger citizens tend to be more innovative and flexible.

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quality of younger population can be a great asset in every sphere of

economy

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the economy

of any country that wish to advance.

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, in cases of recession or other difficult times, usually the people who are young and ready to take risks can safeguard the nation.

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, it is common for many young adults to study in colleges and universities or to work for any

institutions thereby

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institutions, thereby

benefiting the economy and the society as a whole.

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,

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is not the case with most elderly people who are retired and getting medical care, which is leading to ageing population Admittedly, there are some issues involved with

younger population

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the younger population

younger populations

a younger population

. One problem is that those countries which have

larger number

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a larger number

of young adults might be exposed to higher crime rates.

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, according to recent statistics, 80% percent of

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crimes

are committed by the people who are under 30. Another negative aspect is that young citizens tend to experience and live modern life style and ignore traditional and cultural values.

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, a nation might lose some valuable and ancient customs or practices resulting in the disappearance of national identity. In conclusion, in spite of some negative sides mentioned above, I am of the opinion that nations which have more young citizens compared to the elderly can benefit in many ways and clearly outweigh any drawbacks.