Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that few wild animals should be protected insted. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A group of individuals suggest that the lives of all dangerous species should be preserved

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rather than that, a limited

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of dangerous

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should be kept. In my opinion, I believe

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only the lives of dangerous

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pertinent to humans should

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be conserved as these

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pose a serious threat to human life . On

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other hand, a certain school of

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believes all dangerous

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should be protected and

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the fact that all

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are needed to have a functional ecosystem.

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are required at every level of the food chain and the absence of one animal could lead to the disruption of energy levels and lead to the emergence of problems like famine which could occur simply

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of the eradication of wild locusts. An example of

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is seen in Guinea-Bissau where the minister of environment released a report about the surge in the infertility of their farmlands and attributed

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to the absence of

wild natured

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earthworms that burrow the

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surface.

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, another school of

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thinks that a limited

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of wild

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should be preserved and I agree because of the imminent dangers these

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pose. A large

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of wild

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are dangerous and for the purpose of feeding have been responsible for the gruesome mutilation of mankind and

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resulted in the decision to preserve the less violent ones. Studies from the Institute of Forest and Animal Reserves in Florida showed that people were responsible for the massacre of a large

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of bears in the state and

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annihilation

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after over 60 thousand people were murdered by these bears in the forests.

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, it is extremely difficult

domesticating

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to domesticate

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wild

animals

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. Zoo

keeper

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find it highly laborious

taming

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some wild

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as lions and monkeys and would be even more arduous to domesticate a higher

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of dangerous species. In conclusion,

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these wild

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are needed to complete the food chain and energy levels for an effective ecosystem, the imminent threat to human life they pose

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the extreme difficulty attached

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tending to them should not be ignored.