Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In
this
affluent world, rapidly increasing abortion rate is a major problem around the globe. Where many people deem that miscarriage should be legal in the country while others do not favour it. In
this
essay, we will discuss both the
notion
a politically organized body of people under a single government
nation
and I believe that abortion should be considered as a crime and there must be punishment for it in our society. Commencing with the USP reason,
such
kind of activity upholds the biggest problem of an inequality among the male and female ratio in our society. In other worlds, once it is a legal to drop the
child
before birth, based on an immoral thinking of myriad people, it will boost up the trend of keeping the baby boy
instead
of a baby girl. According to
one
survey conducted around the world, 80% couple wanted a boy as their only
child
and even 50% of them were agreed to drop a baby girl if they would have known before birth.
Hence
,
such
kind of criminal activity mush to alleviate in today's prosperous world.
On the other hand
, It is an irrefutable that every citizen has a constitutional right to keep their
child
or not,
also
in
such
circumstances, when they do not prepare for a
child
then
, no
one
can stop them for abortion.
Moreover
, to control the country's population, government can
also
opt to allow
child
termination as a solution. For an example of China, there is a law called ''
One
child
,
one
nation'', where people are not allowed to keep more than
one
child
or else they will be fined for that. By agglomeration all discussion, it must be clearly seen an immoral thinking and consider as an illegal activity which must be punishable, until unless any unusual situation arise.
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