In modern society, it is possible to go shopping, work and communicate via the Internet without face-to-face contact with one another. To what extent do you think this is a positive or negative development?
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widespread use
of the computers, people can go shopping, Suggestion
the widespread use
work
and communicate online in modern society. In my perspective, Use synonyms
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advantages
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outweigh
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disadvantages
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There is no doubt that the Internet will make our lives more convenient and efficient. Primarily, people can break through the barriers of Suggestion
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such
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tasks on weekends. Especially, if you need to communicate with each other abruptly, the Internet will be very helpful. You may not be able to have a face-to-face contact in a very timely fashion which may cause some serious Use synonyms
consequences so
that having a communication via video chat programme and social media is the best way to solve Accept comma addition
consequences, so
this
problem.
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time
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diminishes the opportunities of going outside which Use synonyms
make
the young generation lose some social skills. Suggestion
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Furthermore
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