You have recently travelled on a train and unfortunately left your luggage. Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, •give details of your train trip •describe the luggage you left on the train •say what actions you want him/her to take

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Dear Sir/Madam, My purpose

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letter Is, I want to register a complaint about my lost briefcase on my

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train

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journey. I took a very small

train

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journey from Surat railway station to Ahmedabad station

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Sunday. The

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departs at 9:00 AM from Surat, And it was expected to arrive at 12:30 PM at It Is destination. I board the

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with 2 big travelling bags

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one small cabin backpack. The cabin handbag was accidentally left by me in the

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. A small suitcase is in Balck color and it has two pockets inside the bag. The luggage contains my necessary documents

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my passport, Which is the most essential for me. I want to register a complaint about the lost items, and find my backpack as early as possible. Since, I have a interview in next three days, I must bring those left out papers into the interview. I hope

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matter will be resolved as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Biren

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logical structure

Ensure paragraphs are well-organized, each focusing on a single aspect of the query for clarity.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter to match the context and recipient.

complete response

Expand your explanation of the problem and provide more detailed descriptions when necessary.

coherence cohesion

Work on creating smooth transitions between paragraphs to improve the flow of the letter.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

171 words

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