New food products like GMO (genetically modified organism) threats food security. What is the positive and negative affect of GMO added products?

Nowadays, there are
GMO
products everywhere. The GMOs are too dangerous for our health and they cause cancer. The
GMO
means Genetic Modified Organisms. Viruses, plant, animal and human cells can belong to
GMO
. Based to endocrinologist-nutritionist-Salim Asadov's words
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The
GMO
products can affect chronic effects like allergic, toxic and cancer. In order to can distinguish, have to be
special label
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a special label
on the
GMO
products, feeds and seeds. It is not healthy to get eggs, milk and meat
form
a giver or sender
from
animals fed GMOs.
Also
,
this
has been proven in the laboratory. The reason for
this
, these products can create antibiotic-resistant bacteria. After humans fed with GMOs, these
bacterias
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bacteria
gradually begin to affect. Because we don't fed massive, basically these
ingredient
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ingredients
are given to products as soya, popcorn and etc. Based on animal experiments, some damages have been detected.
For example
, gastric ulcer
have been detected
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has been detected
in the mouse of
feded
having lost freshness or brilliance of color
faded
feuded
with
genetic
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genetically
modified tomato. In
additionally
, dysfunction of
liver
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the liver
and pancreas have been detected in the mouse of
feded
having lost freshness or brilliance of color
faded
feuded
with GMOs.
Such
products of causing damage in the animals, imagine how damages cause in the human. What is the purpose of planting these crops? Day by day the humans' count increases that's why the specialists want to increase the productivity of plants. In order to increase the tolerance of plant to
environment
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the environment
and ensure the abundance of products,
such
crops are prepared. Due to protest, GMOs haven't already been used in Europe since 1990. Even, these products have been
banned entering
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banned, entering
to
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into
our country. Be
carefully and
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careful, and
careful and
caring and
don't fed with GMOs for your health. It is impossible to distinguish between natural and
GMO
products. That's why, try to plant your own crops.
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