Some people say that in modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to healthy ad fit if they want to be. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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An unhealthy lifestyle means more illness and more expense to treat those illnesses.

This

type of lives has undergone by modern human generation

this

day. While several people think it will be hard for changes the habit, others perceive healthy lifestyle is easy to reach. In my own opinion, due to many inventions have been brought by researches nowadays and work hour takes most of our time, it leads inhabitants to have a poor health

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I would argue that good habits depend on the

person

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person's

willingness and in

this

modern era, it is very easy to find any information about live in healthy life. There is no doubt that recent innovation contributing citizens to the degeneration of health. The truth evidences are transportation and junk

food

. Like what happen in

huge capital city

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a huge capital city

USA

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the USA

, every citizen prefers to use their own car for

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

rather than walking in pedestrian Street. There is

also

witnessed Junk

food

as one of the significant

factor

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factors

for

this

issue, it is already proven by research in rural town around the world when fast

food

restaurant like KFC and McDonald thrive in the city, most of

residence

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the residence

will have an obesity and cholesterol problem.

In addition

, working hour

also take

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also takes

a part on

this

severe

habits

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habit

. Apart from

above statements

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the above statements

, in

fact we

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fact, we

can tackle

this

problem easily, it depends on each

person

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person's

willingness which is

want

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wanting

to keep fit or expense more money to threat illness.

For instance

, doing exercise in leisure time, walking or cycling when

traveling

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

office

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the office

, and cooking your own nutritious

food

However that

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However, that

activities

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activity

fetch

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fetches

a little of your time, the benefits are invaluable for yourself.

Furthermore

, thanks to discovery of

Internet

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the Internet

, it really helps us to find any information or suggestion about an

ardor

(often plural) a command given by a superior (e.g., a military or law enforcement officer) that must be obeyed

order

to walk

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your life with fairly good habit. The aforementioned evidence honestly reveals that, it is easy to collate the healthy habit in

this

modern era

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even though, some people feel difficult to have it. Where

possible arrange

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possible, arrange

your timetable to

doing

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does

is doing

exercise in a week and review your day-to-day activity, changes it if necessary, before hospital take a step for your illness body.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

364 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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