There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

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Dear Shreeya, I hope

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letter finds you in your best health. The reason I'm writing to you today is to let you know about the

musical

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concert

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going to be held in Hyderabad on 14th August. Friday Musical Night is going to be a big affair as the tickets are getting sold like

hot cakes

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hotcakes

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Host

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The host

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for the evening is our favourite Aayushman; guess who the singer is? It's the famous Sonu Nigam, isn't it amazing? The show is for about 6 hours starting at 8 pm on the 14th of

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month. I know you are a huge fan of both the host and the singer for the evening, and

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, we haven't met in ages. I think

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the

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right opportunity for us to rebound our friendship. Over the past few months we both are equally caught up in work lives, so, we do deserve a break for refreshment. Since

event

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the event

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is on Friday, you can directly come to the venue after the job. I'd certainly love

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it if

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you will be with me over the weekend at my place. We both can go

for

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apply

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sightseeing around my city during

holiday

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the holiday

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. I can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Komal

skomal1510Fri Jul 24 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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205 words

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There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give own opinion.

Some educationalists think that a programme of international exchange visits is beneficial to all teenage school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?