There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

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Dear Shreeya, I hope

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letter finds you in your best health. The reason I'm writing to you today is to let you know about the

musical

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concert

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going to be held in Hyderabad on 14th August. Friday Musical Night is going to be a big affair as the tickets are getting sold like

hot cakes

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hotcakes

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Host

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The host

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for the evening is our favourite Aayushman; guess who the singer is? It's the famous Sonu Nigam, isn't it amazing? The show is for about 6 hours starting at 8 pm on the 14th of

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month. I know you are a huge fan of both the host and the singer for the evening, and

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, we haven't met in ages. I think

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right opportunity for us to rebound our friendship. Over the past few months we both are equally caught up in work lives, so, we do deserve a break for refreshment. Since

event

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the event

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is on Friday, you can directly come to the venue after the job. I'd certainly love

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it if

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you will be with me over the weekend at my place. We both can go

for

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apply

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sightseeing around my city during

holiday

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the holiday

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. I can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Komal

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

205 words

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Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is that? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more?

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions. What are the primary causes of the quality in life?What solutions can you suggest to improve the quality in life?