There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

Dear Shreeya, I hope
this
letter finds you in your best health. The reason I'm writing to you today is to let you know about the
musical
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music
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concert
that is
going to be held in Hyderabad on 14th August. Friday Musical Night is going to be a big affair as the tickets are getting sold like
hot cakes
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hotcakes
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.
Host
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The host
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for the evening is our favourite Aayushman; guess who the singer is? It's the famous Sonu Nigam, isn't it amazing? The show is for about 6 hours starting at 8 pm on the 14th of
this
month. I know you are a huge fan of both the host and the singer for the evening, and
also
, we haven't met in ages. I think
this
is
a
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the
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right opportunity for us to rebound our friendship. Over the past few months we both are equally caught up in work lives, so, we do deserve a break for refreshment. Since
event
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the event
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is on Friday, you can directly come to the venue after the job. I'd certainly love
if
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it if
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you will be with me over the weekend at my place. We both can go
for
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apply
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sightseeing around my city during
holiday
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the holiday
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. I can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Komal
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