There is a public event coming up in your town. Write a letter to your friend who you think would be interested to take part in it. In your letter, you should: describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her.

#event #town #friend #part #arrangement

Dear Shreeya, I hope

this

letter finds you in your best health. The reason I'm writing to you today is to let you know about the

musical

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music

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concert

that is

going to be held in Hyderabad on 14th August. Friday Musical Night is going to be a big affair as the tickets are getting sold like

hot cakes

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hotcakes

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Host

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The host

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for the evening is our favourite Aayushman; guess who the singer is? It's the famous Sonu Nigam, isn't it amazing? The show is for about 6 hours starting at 8 pm on the 14th of

this

month. I know you are a huge fan of both the host and the singer for the evening, and

also

, we haven't met in ages. I think

this

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the

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right opportunity for us to rebound our friendship. Over the past few months we both are equally caught up in work lives, so, we do deserve a break for refreshment. Since

event

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the event

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is on Friday, you can directly come to the venue after the job. I'd certainly love

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it if

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you will be with me over the weekend at my place. We both can go

for

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apply

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sightseeing around my city during

holiday

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the holiday

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. I can't wait to see you. Yours lovingly, Komal

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