Eating meat is harmful to the health. Do you agree or disagree?

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As population increases, people started to

look other options

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look into other options

apart from fruits and vegetables. It is said by many people that consuming flesh is dangerous for the person's

well-being

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Well-being

. I strongly agree with the given statement. In my opinion,

meat

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creates digestion problems,

harmonal

of or relating to or caused by hormones

hormonal

disbalance

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and many viruses can enter into our

body

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through

meat

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with,

meat

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is dangerous to our

body

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as if we consume

this

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our stomach and other

body

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parts need to work more to digest it.

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Meat usually

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Meat, usually

takes more than 2 hours to digest compared to green vegetables, which takes only 30 minutes.

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, it is scientifically proven that

human

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the human body

body

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is not mean

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is not meant

does not mean

doesn't mean

to eat flesh.

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, as population

incraeses

become bigger or greater in amount

increases

increased

day by day, people started to produce

meat

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via chemicals, which is no less than

possion

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a passion

passion

poison

passions

for our

body

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, Farm owners

gives

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give

injection

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injections

to animals so they can gain weight quickly;

consequently

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they grow

fastly

with rapid movements

quickly

. Farm owners sale them into

market

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the market

, which is

extremly

to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect

extremely

harmful for us.

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last

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year, In

china

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China

, more than 100 cases of illness

was repoted

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were reported

was reported

in the hospital and when the government

investigate

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investigates

, they found that people consumed

meat

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, which was given

harmonal injection

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a hormonal injection

hormonal injection

the hormonal injection

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, various types of viruses can enter into our

body

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, if we consume flesh. Animals have many

type

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types

of small

particals

(nontechnical usage) a tiny piece of anything

particles

and when

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individual

eat

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eats

meat

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they enter into

person's

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a person's body

the person's body

body

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The latest

example of

this

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is COVID-19. Many

scientist

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scientists

has proved

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have proven

that

this

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virus enter into human

body

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due to eating bats. To conclude, our

body

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is mean to consume organic and naturally grown fruits and vegetables. In my opinion, many

disease

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diseases

such

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as digestion system,

harmonal

of or relating to or caused by hormones

hormonal

problem can

ocuure

come to pass

occur

in our

body

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, if we consuming

meat

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

chronic diseases
balanced diet
nutritional deficiencies
plant-based diet
ethical concerns
environmental impact
deforestation
greenhouse gas emissions
sustainable
Vitamin B12
processed meat substitutes
social and cultural implications
mitigate
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plant-based options
health benefits
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