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The graph chart provides the statistic information about quantity of
tourist
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 trips to the certain Caribbean island covering the
period
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 from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of visiting was rising gradually throughout the given
period
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. In the case of tourists, who stayed on cruise ships, the figure has uplifted dramatically since 2012. Whereas the data for
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tourist
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tourists
the tourist
 on the island was fluctuation during 7 years. Turning to the details, the indicator for ships`
tourist
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 stood at 0,25 millions in 2010 and reached the peak of 2
millions
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million
 at the end of provided
period
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. It can be clearly seen that in 2012 the quantity of
tourist
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 from cruise started
to increased
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to increase
 noticeably from the point of 0,25
millions
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million
. As for stayers on the island, it began with approximately 0,75
millions
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million
 of visitors and ended with 1,5
millions
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million
.
Also
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 here was a significant growth in 2011 and a slight drop in 2016. If we take into consideration summary of
tourist
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 visiting, the amount of tourists was 1
millions
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million
 at the beginning of the
period
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 and has attached the level of 3,5 millions in 2017.
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Furthermore it
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Furthermore, it
 couldn’t be tracked any downward tendency all over the
period
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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