The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges upon one’s privacy.

Although

social media has brought the world to our

finger tips

the end (tip) of a finger

fingertips

and global

connectivity

has improved drastically in terms of data sharing, still there exists a threat of

privacy

which needs to be dealt with. I completely agree to the fact that social media has improved

connectivity

and data sharing.

This

essay

firstly

will talk about the benefits of social

media

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media, then

then

issues related to

privacy

will be discussed.

To begin

with, social media

has paved

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have paved

the way to global

connectivity

since its arrival because of which communication with people across nations has eased. Not only people can make new friends on various social platforms but can introspect based on factors like hobbies, likes and dislikes.

For instance

, I have made quite a new friend across the world using a social media app called Instagram.

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Also, it

is observed that people are able to share photos and videos easily using apps like WhatsApp, ShareIt to name a few, with improvement in standard of quality as well.

On the other hand

, data security has been a major concern and even-though people are sharing confidential data over social platforms, it has to stop to prevent

privacy

. It’s advised that if classified data needs to be shared, they

should be send

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should send

should be sent

through encrypted and secured pathway so that it cannot be hacked.

For example

, while sending important data like bank account numbers and passwords, we should be

shrewd judge

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a shrewd judge

of

consequences

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the consequences

which might follow afterwards. To conclude, I would like to say that even-though social media has its benefit like easy access,

connectivity

and sharing of data, factor like

privacy

needs to

looked

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look

at and act

accordingly

.