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In The Future,Nobody Will Buy Printed Newspapers Or Books Because They Will Be Able To Read Everything They Want Online Without Paying.To What Extent Do You Agree Or Disagree With This Statement?

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It is generally believed that since people currently able to
acquired
Suggestion
acquire
 instruction on the Internet in a much easier way than in the past, printed newspapers or books are no longer necessary. While I accept that online sources of material have some advantages over traditional books, I would argue
that is
 still a great need for printed books in today's world. It is reasonable to argue that read online has some advantages over books.
First
, they can absorb new knowledge without leaving home. They don'
t
 need to spend too much money buying books or newspapers daily, so they can not only save a sum of money for emergencies but
also
 protect the environment. But there will repercussions if people aren'
t
 able to distinguish the toxic expertise.
Besides
, that children's health will be damaged when they have time-consuming on the technology targets.
However
, I side with those who believed that printed newspapers and books still play an important role in people's world.
Firstly
, there is infallible intelligence provided by books and newspapers so we can'
t
 be perplexed by data which incorrect. Nowadays, there is a larger number of hazardous
clue
Suggestion
clues
 which not only renders us being baffled, but
also
 exacerbates our intelligence so choosing to read books will bring more advantages. In conclusion, we can'
t
 deny the impact on people's lives of online intelligence. Beside that read printed newspapers and books is
also
 plays an important role in people's acquisition of philosophy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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