As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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There is a lot of development which, increasing in the countries.For

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reason most of the people buy and use their own vehicles

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which is beneficial for individuals but causes detrimental effects on

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lifestyle change as countries developed. So many persons use their own vehicle for their comfortable lifestyle. For

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, the quantity of vehicle, increasing in countries which causes emissions of carbon dioxide and sometimes carbon monoxide

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causes global warming.

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, vehicle smokes polluted

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is affecting our human life badly.

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, nowadays Dhaka is becoming the worst place for habitats due to increase in pollution from the increasing number of vehicles.

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is affected inhabitants of Dhaka.

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, increasing numbers of own vehicles decreases dependency of public transport. Which affected lower income people because they are not able to any other work. When public transport decreases their income

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decrease.

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, during a pandemic situation many people avoided public transport

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time they are affected badly by losing their income.

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, cars, polluted air so,

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affects trees, birds. They

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develop as their natural way of developing. So,

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causes harmful effects on the existing greenery

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In conclusion, countries developed rapidly

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, a lot of people influenced for using and buying own vehicles which is only helpful for persons, but causes a detrimental effect on the existing

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because it increasing global warming as well as greenery

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which is harmful for us.

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Topic Vocabulary:

personal mobility
convenience
commuting
quality of life
personalized space
carbon emissions
global warming
air pollution
traffic congestion
environmental degradation
resource depletion
electric vehicles
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