People in the current generation are not fit and active, and it will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons and suggest solutions for this issue?

It has been
ancipeathed
that millennials can face series
health
realted
being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics
related
issues because they are not fit and active. Unhealthy
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and eating
habbits
an established custom
habits
are the primary reasons
of
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for
this
,
however we
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however, we
can solve
this
with regular
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
and proper rest.
This
essay will discuss these reasons and provided solutions.
Lets
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Let's
begin with
causes
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the causes
. People now-a-days working around the clock. They work till very late;
consequently
many
health
issues
occure
come to pass
occur
due to
this
.
For instance
, a recent report from Indian labour department shows that
majority
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the majority
of people work overtime. Another reason
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is, wrong
eating habits. Younger people consumed oily food, which is
extreamely
to a high degree or extent; favorably or with much respect
extremely
dangerous
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Danger
Dangerous
for a
perosn
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person's
person
health
. Many studies
shows
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show
have shown
are showing
that fast food takes more time to digest as
compare
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compared
to
normal diet
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a normal diet
.
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Solution
food/ jun
k/ fast
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
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health
issues have been seen in the people of current generation,
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will reason: unhealthy life style and eating habbits(junk and oily) solution: regular excercise and , wok
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • physically inactive
  • technological advancements
  • screen time
  • unhealthy eating habits
  • reliance on fast food
  • lack of motivation
  • lack of discipline
  • busy schedules
  • hectic lifestyles
  • outdoor and recreational spaces
  • regular exercise
  • physical activities
  • healthy eating habits
  • awareness
  • fitness
  • access
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