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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Recently, the government facing huge challenges to discover new methods to tackle the dramatically increasing number in
waste
 production. Various factors
such
 as the frequent industrial expansion and excessive buying habits have contributed to the increasing of
waste
 production issue. Mitigating
this
problem
 would involve increasing taxation and raise public awareness. The water treatment issue we are facing today is the result of many causes. The main one is the Significant industrial inflation, which requires the disposal of several materials. The proper
waste
 disposal process is very costly for the industry owners.
Therefore
, they tend to just throw their wastes.A
further
 cause for the rubbish
problem
 is the new excessive buying habits which are becoming more common in our society. A research conducted at the University of Liverpool indicates that families tend to buy more food than they actually need by 37% and that food end up in trash cans. Several measures could be taken in order to address the
waste
 phenomena.
to
Suggestion
To
 begin with, the government could regulate new rules and policy regarding to
waste
 manipulation for factories and industrial areas. Another obvious solution is by applying new taxes on individuals and organizations.
Lastly
 the government should launch a frequent nationwide campaign to raise the general awareness about the
waste
problem
,
in addition
 to the negative consequences of the excessive buying behaviour. In conclusion, various factors have let to the
problem but
Accept comma addition
problem, but
this
 situation could be addressed by regulating new policies and fines, as we all educating communities about the danger of the redundant purchase of products. Given
this
 situation, it is recommended that steps should be taken immediately in order to ensure that the situation is getting solved
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