Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Neighbours
are the people
who live near us, and their behaviour influence
our daily life. Good Change the verb form
influences
neighbours
can make us feel comfortable and give us much help, and everyone will benefit from a good relationship among neighbours
. Friendly behaviour, willingness, and respect are some important qualities that make great people
who live next door to us. For many reasons, which will be mentioned below the essay.
First of all, one of the most important characteristic
of good Change to a plural noun
characteristics
neighbours
is that they have a
good living Correct article usage
apply
habit
and are friendly to Fix the agreement mistake
habits
others
. A person with a bad habit will affect your daily life. For example
, children are most likely to be influenced by bad neighbours
and carry on bad habits. On the other hand
, being friendly is also
an important nature of good neighbours
. If people
who live near my house are unfriendly, they are hard to approach and difficult to get along with
.
Secondly
, another important aspect of of
good Remove the redundancy
apply
neighbours
is that they should be willing to help others
. In our daily life
, emergency situations may happen, and we may encounter difficulties which cannot be resolved by ourselves. At Fix the agreement mistake
lives
this
time, the quickest help we can get is probably from our neighbours
. To some degree, neighbours
are as important as relatives to us, because they could
provide Wrong verb form
can
the
immediate help. In the same way, a Correct article usage
apply
neighbour
who likes to help others
will get help in return. Help each others
Change to a singular noun
other
can
form a friendly and harmonious relationship among the Verb problem
apply
neighbours
.
Lastly
, neighbours
should always be respectful between
each other and Change preposition
of
having
a good reputation Wrong verb form
have
among
society. Respect Change preposition
in
to
one another is the most important quality that a Change preposition
for
neighbour
should have in order to live in harmony. Also
they should avoid Add a comma
Also,
of
disturbing and causing too much trouble. Change preposition
apply
For example
, people
who live next door to us should not be noisy because in my family there are many students and they need a quiet atmosphere in order to study and concentrate on their fields.
In conclusion, it is important for us to get closer to our neighbours
to feel comfortable about our lives. A good neighbour
is someone who should be friendly, helpful, and respectful. If my neighbour
lacks any qualities of these, they won't become good neighbours
of mine.Submitted by trường tiểu học on
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