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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign language is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

#computers #language #waste #time
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İn our century, technology is improving quickly and people can do their
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work
 easily
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between
 the computers. Many people use translate apps for translating words or sentences quickly and accurately in their daily life. I
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 use computers for translating words in lessons or for contacting with foreigners easily and quickly.
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, I think it is not good for long-term conversations, so learning
foreign
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a foreign language
language
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 should not be suspended. I agree with
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, computers make our lives easier than
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 centuries. Before computers or
internet
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the internet
, many
dictionary
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dictionaries
, grammar books for languages were held at every person’s home. It takes much time looking for something in
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the book
a book
 and people
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is getting
 tired. These books
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 cover many
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spaces
 at home. As technology
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developed
, many translating apps were created and everyone can find any word’s translation easily and they can make sentences in every
language
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 without knowing them.
On the other hand
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, I disagree with
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 situation that not learning any
language
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 because of translators. If people want to express themselves quickly and accurately in the conversation, they should know that foreign
language
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.
Although
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 it is easy to find any foreign word or expression in the internet, it is
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 time consuming to look for these words and combining them in one sentence. Translating words from one to another does not create sustainability.
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,
Accept space
,
computers do not translate exactly, they sometimes make mistakes and sometimes people are misunderstood.From the other aspect, if someone works for
foreign company
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a foreign company
foreign companies
, he or she should know that foreign
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language for
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language, for
 being ready in every situation and can answer the questions easily and quickly which asked them, so they will become confident. İn conclusion, İ do not deny conveniences which computers bring us like translating
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
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. I
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 use them in my life.
However
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, it does not mean we should not learn any
language
Use synonyms
 because of translators, there are many difficulties about them.
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