In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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In the globalization era,

world

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the world

has become a small village, which in results has become easier to access almost anything from every corner of the

world

and education is one of the impacted areas.

Now a days

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Nowadays

, students

has

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have

access to various institutes throughout the

world

consequently

, they are keen to study in foreign universities for their future benefits, though,

this

has its own pros and cons which we will discuss in

this

essay. On the one side, most of the pupils

tends

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tend

move

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to move

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into

western countries after completing their high schools for better development in their career. Studying overseas gives one a good exposure like

engaging

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to engage

with different cultures and a new perspective of life. Learning from global

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

opens the door of big firms for them in terms of job and business.

For example

, students who

has studied

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have studied

from famous global schools are preferred over those who has studied from local institutes.

On the other hand

, it has its own disadvantages too, Teenagers

gets

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get

easily influenced by others which may result in derailing from their goals which they set before stepping on foreign land. One the main biggest con is, they easily get involved in illegal activities which as I said ruins their career, because mostly no adult is with them to guide. Another factor is cost of education on

world level

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a world level

is way too high as which costs them a fortune;

thus

, they have to go for student loans, which generally has higher interest rates and repayment of loans again costs them good amount of time and money. In a nutshell, every coin has two sides which

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are

the same as the case of getting the education, studying

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global level does make a difference to

student’s life

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a student’s life

the student’s life

in a positive and negative way.

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