Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

A

potion

something determined in relation to something that includes it

portion

of society has a conception that zoos are rude and should be shut down. On

other hand

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the other hand

, some people believe that it can be beneficial in the protection and conservation of

wild life

all living things (except people) that are undomesticated

wildlife

. Before, I conclude my

opinion I

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opinion, I

would like to discuss both opinions. There is no doubt, that every creature on

this

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planet

earth has right

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earth has a right

to freedom. Nobody should be kept in the captivity as it against the nature. Keeping animals in zoos is

unethical and cruel act

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the unethical and cruel act

performed by mankind. Not only

this

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human started smuggling body parts of animals for earning money. There was

survey

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a survey

coducted

direct the course of; manage or control

conducted

by newspaper " times of India" which revealed that wild

species

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which had been taken away from forests and kept in cage were more vulnerable to death than others in wild land. Nowadays, there are many endangered

species

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of wildlife which needs to be protected to preserve their

species

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of them. In order to do so, they must be kept in the zoo to save them from vanishing. In zoos the wild creatures

reamain

stay the same; remain in a certain state

remain

remains

roaming

safe as

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

staff member monitor their day to day activities so that if there is any potential disease or symptoms of it discovered in them

than

subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)

then

they should be dealt

by

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with

doctors to save their lives. In the jungle it is not possible to tack down

such

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threats to their lives. After considering both sides, I came to

conlusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

that zoos are not

ethical way

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an ethical way

to save animals but if it is done for selected

species

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who are on the verge of extinction than it is acceptable and ethical.