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The given figure illustrates the amount of US government expenditure on research from 1980 to 2008. Overall,
health
 and general science accounted for the majority and minority of
income respectively
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income, respectively
 during these 28 years and other’s expenditure is the only expense that experienced a decrease, compared to its
first
year
. The
year
 1980 is the only
year
 that
health
 expenses were close to the other rivals with 8
billion
 dollars, after
this
year
Suggestion
year's
health
 expenditure increased dramatically and reached 23
billion
 dollars in 2004 which was followed by a decrease to finish its rivalry with 28
billion
 dollars in 2008. Between 1980 and 1996 the amount of money invested
on
Suggestion
in
 energy and apace
were
Suggestion
was
 approximately the same around 5
billion
 dollars per
year but
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year, but
 after 1996 space’s line started to climb and reached 9
billion
 dollars in 2008, while energy’s line started its fluctuating path after 1996 and finished
this
 journey with 7
billion
 dollars in 2008. The highest invested money was taken place in 2004 with 23
billion
 dollars on
health
 while the lowest one occurred in 1980 related to general science and from 1984 to 4 years later the expenses of other, space and energy were almost the same accounting for 5
billion
 dollars.
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