Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Citizens are encouraged to retain all their salary earnings, while they are promoted to pay a certain

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of

tax

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to the

nation

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national

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.

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is a debatable topic.

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essay is going to discuss both sides of view and listed out my opinion.

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, those

nation people

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nation, people

are available to put all their salaries into their bank account for their future use.

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they earn a large

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of

money

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from the companies, they will spend a certain

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of

money

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within their living societies during their daily life. Eventually, the quality of life is not equivalent to the salary input.

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, in Hong Kong, young adults are necessary to spend

money

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on their rental apartments, foods, clothes, personal and medical expenses since those nation governments would not have a great support to them.

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, a number of citizens are promoted to deduce a certain

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of

money

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from their salaries to the

government

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tax

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department. Having deduced around 40% of their total salaries, the employees cannot have a lot of

money

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for them to save

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on

bank.

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, they would like to spend

money

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on their essential daily life expenses only.

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, in New Zealand, those workers would not have a high encouragement for them to spend on those high

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a standard by which something can be measured or judged

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products including Gucci, Coach products. The national hospital would provide a standard medical services as well as full medical coverage

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of

for

the clinical expenses for the elderly. In conclusion, from the aspect of the

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of

country

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the country

, they have more power and capacity to control the usage of

money

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from the high

tax

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income. I believe that a citizen is willing to have a well-developed and fully medical coverage

under paying

pay too little

underpaying

a high

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scale of salary rather than paying his or her attention on the expenses when

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any maneuver made as part of progress toward a goal

stepping

stopping

into

senior age group

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the senior age group

senior age groups

a senior age group

. I strongly support that the

government

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should set up a high

tax

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income scale for their national young people.