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being slim is associated with fashion. do you think it is positive or negative trend?

#fashion #trend
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Being attractive is every youngsters dream in
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 modern era. Everyone, spending a
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 of time and money on their looks these days. In fact,
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 obsession has become a big market for a
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 of companies. They are promoting that being slim is the fashionable and attractive and a
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 of people, especially teenagers are believing
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 true. I think, there are a
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 of negatives in that. I will explain a few of them with some examples in
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 essay. Fitness is really important for humans. Due to the busy lifestyle, it is very hard to take a balanced diet these days. Addiction to junk food causes severe
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 issues, including obesity and cardiovascular diseases. To avoid
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, we should maintain required
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 according to our body height. If we don't have the required
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 it will damage our
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, so being overweight and less
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 both causes
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 issues. To look attractive, we should be fit and healthy. It depends upon the your body. Skinny or slim body is not fashionable. Fitness should come from proper diets and workouts. A
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 reports show that young girls are not taking enough food than the required for their age. They are doing it to control their
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 and want to look slim. It is not acceptable, and it brings a
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 of
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 issues like, lack haemoglobin, iron and vitamin deficiency.
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 should be avoided and controlled by educating people and spreading awareness about the
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 and diet. Everyone should take care of their
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 by maintaining proper
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. To conclude, being slim alone is not a way to look attractive and it is not for everyone.
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