You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 254 words.

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In recent decades, it is an often debated topic, how success has been judged, on what basis a person can be successful, whether it is physical
strength
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or cognitive
strength
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, which leads to being successful in the
sport
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. In my opinion,
both
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are useful as per their need, which is required in different situations and
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have an equal
weightage
(statistics) a coefficient assigned to elements of a frequency distribution in order to represent their relative importance
weighting
. Physical
strength
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is essential when it comes to safeguarding, our own selves in the time of danger or to rescue someone from
threat
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a threat
the threat
threats
or to win any tournament
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game
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. It is necessary to be physically strong e.g., a
sport
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like wrestling, which has a mandatory requirement to maintain a suitable weight, in order to get qualified and, where a wrestler’s physical
strength
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, is given importance, so that he
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she can use his physical
strength
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to win the
game
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.
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, their training is very rigid, and they have to stay on a strict diet. If they are not following the mentioned diet, they won't be able to play for the team. As in wrestling, if a
player
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is not strong enough, he
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she won't be able to keep up, not even till 1 round, and any injury can happen while playing.
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this
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, the
player
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also
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needs to use their mental ability to win the
game
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.
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, with respect to mental
strength
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, sports like Kabaddi, and Football
required mindful
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required, mindful
strategies along with physical
strength
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. All these sports required a lot of tricks and patience to win like Kabaddi, where a
player
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has to be strongly determined, and tough to beat the opponent players. There is a lot of chasing required in Kabaddi and Football. The opponent team can burn the
player
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mentally
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mentality
, and if a
player
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is not able to assimilate, and tackle with them calmly, he
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she has a possibility to lose the
game
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. That's why, getting selected in
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type of sports, requires mental
strength
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to cope up with any kind of stress or failure.   To conclude, I personally feel,
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the qualities
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I
.
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physical and mental health are equally required to be successful in any
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.
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, they hold their own importance when it comes to any
sport
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and
both
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go hand in hand.
Submitted by Samiksha Singh on

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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  • despite

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