An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * Offer to find somewhere to stay * Give advice about what to do * Give information about what clothes to bring
Dear Amir,
I hope you and your family are well. I’m so excited that you will come and visit my
city
next week. So, I’m writing to you and give you some information about my city
.
I want to tell you about the accommodation. Although
my city
is a pilgrimage city
and there are a variety of hotels and hustles, I suggest you stay in a cozy
bungalow in the countryside because you can enjoy nature and extraordinary views Change the spelling
cosy
instead
of the crowded street and polluted air. Even if you want, I can book the accommodation for you. It’s my pleasure to do something for you.
Aside from accommodations, I will give you some locations of historical places which are the heart of our city
so you can visit all of them on foot. Also
, there is an ancient bazaar which has herbal medicine where you can buy souvenirs for your mom because I know your mom loves traditional medicine. Also
, don’t worry I’m with you in all these steps and accompany you.
You don’t know about the weather in our city
. In fact, we have four seasons in a day then
suggest you pick up a couple of clothes
such
as warm clothes
and summer clothes
because throughout the day you can go out with a T-shirt and vice versa the night should dress up warm clothes
.
I can’t wait to see you soon and also
, you
don’t hesitate to contact me if you want more information.
Warm wishes,
MustafaCorrect pronoun usage
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea followed by relevant supporting details. While you have generally maintained this, some paragraphs may benefit from a more focused central idea for enhanced clarity.
task achievement
You should make sure to cover all three points mentioned in the task evenly. While you have touched on each aspect, expanding with more balanced details among them would enhance your response.
coherence cohesion
Consider varying your sentence structures to showcase a range of grammar and to keep the reader engaged. Controlled complexity in sentence construction would help improve the letter's flow.
task achievement
Ensure your advice is clear and concise. While providing suggestions about the weather and clothes, you could give examples or specific items to pack for increased precision and usefulness.
task achievement
Avoid general statements that lack depth or specificity; rather, offer concrete and actionable advice relevant to the reader's request for information.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite