Some people think that sports involving violence, such as boxing and martial arts, should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions. To what extend do you agree?

According to some people, some types of sports, representing indignation, should not be shown on television and removed from international sports tournaments. In my opinion, banning mortal sports is not acceptable way. It is undeniable, injury and random death is always the main part of extreme sports. To illustrate, in the UFC, athletes may accept heavy hit at any time.
As a result
, the rival may get a trauma leading to death or a lifelong disability. Watching
this
on live performance may impact negatively impact on impressionable spectators.
Hence
,
such
sports are not recommended to the faint-heart people.
Thus
, if someone is susceptible cruel sporting is not advised.
However
, in the modern life, there is a large amount of economic benefits in sports. Especially extreme one is the most profitable nowadays. There are several income-generating examples
such
as broadcasting, team brands, totalizator, selling tickets and special shows
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • combat sports
  • glorification of violence
  • impressionable audiences
  • cultural heritage
  • self-discipline
  • sportsmanship
  • media portrayal
  • regulatory measures
  • censorship
  • psychological impact
  • broadcasting regulations
  • watershed timing
  • advocates and opponents
  • ethical considerations
  • economic implications
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