Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

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decade, there has been

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in many developing

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opening wide for

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and focusing their efforts on developing and promoting their

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industries because of foreign revenue and worldwide identity.

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is a great step towards

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in nation’s economy and I strongly affirm

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numerous drawbacks that can arise.

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with, the primary reason for developing

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in a country is due to the economic benefits that it brings. A well-developed

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industry creates a lot of new businesses and jobs for local people, and an influx of money from foreign

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, promoting international

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can help to improve international relations with other

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, and to share a country’s customs and culture with people all around the world.

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, many schools and universities, nowadays arrange international

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for their students to learn about different cultures and ways of living.

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, many

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companies

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need.

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, there are a number of drawbacks that arise from the expansion of a country’s

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industry.

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across worldwide

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are suffering from many

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in

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.

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, most

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generally drink bottled water when on holiday, and

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creates mountains of plastic waste every year. Many developing

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do not have appropriate recycling facilities and do not know how to deal with the waste, and

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, it commonly ends up littered throughout the countryside, rivers, seas, beaches and oceans. In conclusion, I would have to say that expanding the

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industry in a country is a positive development if it is properly managed, and the environmental and cultural impacts are closely monitored and minimised

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becoming one of the great

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of revenue for many

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