“Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?”
There is no doubt that the number of violent crimes has increased to a large extent nowadays. While many believe that capital punishment is not the solution to control
such
violence, according to me, it is indeed necessary.
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is important because the fear of death can be intimidating to many, and can force them to rethink their decision. Even witnessing another person going through the ordeal Linking Words
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, they might not be fit to live among the society and more importantly in prison, where they are fed and nurtured with the money that could have been utilized in many other places. Use synonyms
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of letting criminals taking advantage of prison facilities, they should be given the death penalty, so that the cost incurred on them can be spent on something constructive.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the government should be focusing more on the good citizens rather than on prisoners who have only affected the society negatively. No matter what the reason is behind a Linking Words
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, there is no point in keeping alive a person who could become violent and hurt other people. Rather than putting them in jail, these people should be eradicated as soon as possible, so that others with similar intentions will Use synonyms
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