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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their solo purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with?

#people #schools #solo #purpose
Education plays
vital role
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a vital role
 in a person’s development. Some people argue that education should be limited to subjective
knowledge
 while
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 think that
student
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students
a student
the student
 should learn with entertainment.
However
, I opine that learning with
fun
 is
better option
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a better option
. In
modern era
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the modern era
 of education, new pedagogy is adopted by schools that lean with
fun
.
This
 type of learning methodology strikes good impact on the
student
’s study.
Firstly
, they can enjoy learning rather than feel boring.
Secondly
, they don’t feel
pressure
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pressured
 or burden of study.
Also
, if learning process
include
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includes
 games it can develop confidence and team interaction
in
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with
 the
student
. With new technology games
student
 can
lean
gain knowledge or skills
learn
 to solve problems
by
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with
 them self. It is
also
 proven that
this
 new method of teaching is
quick learning process
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a quick learning process
the quick learning process
.
On the other hand
, playing activities might distract the
student
’s focus
from
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of
 study. They take more interest in playing rather than learning. Some students
then
 habituate to learn with
fun
activities only
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activities, only
 that may lead problem for their higher studies. To sum it up, Education is not only gaining
knowledge
 or
information but
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information, but
also
 learn skills and techniques. And that can develop in the
student
by
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with
 some practical
knowledge
. It is important to choose
fun
 activities for
leaning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
 which can increase
knowledge
 to students. In my opinion,
advantages
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the advantages
 of learning with some entertainment outweigh its disadvantages.
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