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Some people believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product?

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It is believed that the
product
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 which is costly, people
tend
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tends
 to buy it more than lower one. While the
price
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 has a considerable impact on buyers, there are several factors influence consumers.
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 essay will discuss about both issues above. On the one hand, it is true that a majority of consumers tend to consider how much does a
product
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 cost before purchasing and the effect of
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 prices on buyers varies depending on their purpose.
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, using exorbitant products represents people's social state.
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, wealthy families keep up with new trends because they have to fit into their wealthy community. And high-priced items are often chosen by them because they can show their wealth.
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, if the
price
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 of a
product
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 is by far higher than that of customers’ financial ability, the customers fail to buy that good. Students,
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, are likely to select a laptop with reasonable prices in accordance with their educational demand
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 of a luxurious laptop because they understand that their financial status is limited.
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, there are some elements which effect on the customer's decision to purchase a
product
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. Obviously, the quality of products plays a vital role in the customer's choices. If there are two products which their prices are approximately, the customer tends to choose high quality products even though its
price
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 is slightly higher.
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, the brand of goods is
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 a crucial factor.
The more famous
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The most famous
 brand is, the more products they can sell.
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 explains why an enormous amount of budget has run for marketing campaigns in companies. In conclusion,
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 the
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 of good influence customers’ decision, several factors
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 have a significant impact on how consumers buy products.
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