Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution, others think there are some other ways. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The traffic emission is one of the most serious problems that human is dealing with nowadays. In order to solve
this
problem, there are many suggestions that
car
-free days should be held internationally.
However
, I believe that these events
just achieve
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have just achieved
a little success, and there are many solutions to prevent exhaust fumes. By organizing
car
-free days, the numbers of cars will be decreased in these days, except the use of cars for emergency situations.
This
measure, from my opinion, there are two
fact
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facts
should be considered.
Firstly
, in 365 days, about 2% of annual
fumes
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fume
emission is decreased, resulting from one-week
car
-free day. Let’s consider it in more detail, 2% of annual exhaust fumes is not a significant result, meaning that it is unworthy to organize
car
-free days.
Secondly
, during the event, some people may lose their wage,
such
as taxi drivers or gas station employees.
On the other hand
, there are many effective methods to minimize the traffic fumes. Increasing taxes on
car
ownership is one the best ways to reduce the number of cars. If cost for
private
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private cars
a private car
car
is so expensive, many people will give up purchasing
car
and switching to public transports.
Besides
,
government
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the government
should raise public awareness of restricting the use of
car
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a car
cars
the car
.
Instead
of cars, bicycles or walk on foot should be taken to
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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