Some people believe that it is very important to make a large amount of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Money

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plays an important role in the

life

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of people. Some may argue that it is necessary to earn more cash, while others say that it is sufficient to satisfy their basic needs. It may be significant to earn a lot of

money

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however

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, in my opinion, I think it is enough to have a comfortable

life

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. On the one hand, some people believe that

money

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is everything. It is because they want to enjoy all the luxuries and have high recognition in the society. They always try to make as much

money

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as they can.

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, my neighbour built a house thinking they would boast their status in the area,

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, they spent a lot for the house without any concern for the cost.

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, for these types of people, they are never satisfied with what they earn and always thrive for more.

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, some persons just want to satisfy their daily needs. They want to manage with what they have because they want to enjoy the

life

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ahead of them.

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, it may be because they want to enjoy the time they have with their family, friends, relatives, etc.

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, my friend is a middle class person who earns a basic salary for living and she had savings every month,

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she was able to go on a vacation with her family and enjoy a lot of time with them.

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, I think it is adequate to live with what we have to appreciate what

life

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throws at us. In conclusion,

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it is argued that it is necessary to make a large amount of

money

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, to show the status in the society.

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, I believe it is not true and I think it is sufficient to lead a comfortable

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by enjoying the time with our loved ones.

Naga Lakshmi KarnaTue Jul 28 2020

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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