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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Today some
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Today, some
 people affirm that social works,
such
 as the working for charity, improving the
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
, assisting other people, cleaning, or teaching younger children must be a part of the school curriculum. Certainly
this
 kind of
work
 influence
to
Suggestion
of
 teenagers positively,
first
 of all self-responsibility, self-discipline and it helps young people develop their own personal qualities. Serving those less fortunate than ourselves teaches us many lessons including how to
work
 with people from other backgrounds and the value of hard
work
. In spite of these advantages I do not agree that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of
education programmes
Suggestion
the education programme
education programme
an education programme
.
In
Suggestion
At
such
 a young age, teenagers should not be engaged on
this
 works,
this
 can negatively affect their
worldview
, they will think life is too complicated and they will not enjoy life. I think it should be on a voluntary basis and at adulthood. Because education system is including a lot of subjects and pupils do not have free time. In the age of information technology to keep abreast of everything they should know a lot, to read a lot and must
work
 hard on yourself.
Besides
this
 they have to get a time for themselves,
for example
 hobbies and entertainments. Another reason for my disagreement with
this
 is student should be more focused on education and should not be forced to do something that might distract them from their main target and task. All in all,
school
Suggestion
the school
schools
 should provide academic skills. Life skills, attitude and
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 should inculcate from parents.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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