In many cities and towns the high volume on road traffic is problem . What are the cause of this and how to solve this problem.

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nowadays
techonolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
has changed
lifestyle
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the lifestyle
of
hunans
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humans
and vehicles has become part of mankind
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resons
a rational motive for a belief or action
reason
of it may possible to
long distance path
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the long distance path
in less
time
. Public transport
are
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is
some
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
time
late
coming at a subsequent time or stage
later
and
fullfilled
completed to perfection
fulfilled
with
crowd
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the crowd
as well as be a waste of
time
of individuals
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So
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people purchase their private vehicle and it is lead to
traffic
become terrible problem
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I personally believe that many
resons
a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
behind it which discuss could be follows.
To begin
with
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first
and foremost
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nowadays everyone
want
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wants
to travel with easy and fast way
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Thus
, people purchased their private vehicles
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because of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
public transport has become
crowd
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crowded
area and it take wasting
time
of
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on
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people
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They
donot
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do not
reach
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on
in
time
as they want.
Secondly
, not all but some extent masses did not have sense about
traffic
rules
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They always break
rule
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rules
and
ragulation
an authoritative rule
regulation
regulations
which made by government and
public
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the public
have to face many
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
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After
moment
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a moment
the moment
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traffic
jam has established terrible tackle for
there
being one more than two
three
individuals
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Thirdly but
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Thirdly, but
not
last
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the roads were designed with old way which are narrow
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So, the
incresed
become bigger or greater in amount
increase
many problems for masses that cause of jams.
On the other hand
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there are various ways
ti
in the direction of
to
solve
this
problem
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Furthermore
,
government
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the government
should make hard rules about
traffic
jans
press tightly together or cram
jams
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If people follow
rule
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rules
and regulation
then
traffic
could be
decresed
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
deceased
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Apart from
this
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admistration
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the administration
administration
should serve more public transport
facitlites
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
people travel more on public
trsnsport
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
then
it
atomayically
in a reflex manner
automatically
leads
decresed
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
traffics
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traffic
jams and private vehicles
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Afterthat
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After that
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minstry
religious ministers collectively (especially Presbyterian)
ministry
should
also
make
rule
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rules
that a fix number of vehicles for one family its lead to
decresd
made less in size or amount or degree
decreased
decrease
private vehicles as well as
traffic
jams. In
conculsion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
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although
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally feel that
this
problem do not
decrese
decrease in size, extent, or range
decrease
distress
easily
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However
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mangement
the act of managing something
management
should make
rules
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the rules
and
awereness
having knowledge of
awareness
in among peoples.
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