Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to enquire more details about a computer program being offered by your esteemed institution. I am keen to pursue

this

course when the

batch commences at the end of the month.

Although

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I don’t meet the pre-requisite for

this

development I.e. A basic certification in computing, I am keen to pursue

this

series. Unfortunately, I was not able to study computers as one of the electives in college, given my institution did not have a proper set-up for computer education.

Nonetheless

, I have tried to keep myself abreast with most of the developments in the computing field. I am a Science graduate with majors in Mathematics which would be useful to write computer codes. I am keen to join the programme given my profound interest in computers and would request you to kindly make an exception by allowing me to join the lectures in the coming batch. I am a fast learner and would be able to cope up with the pace despite not having undergone any elementary series earlier. I look forward to hearing from you. Thanking You

Your’s

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truly Vijay

Submitted by Vijay Agarwal on Tue Jul 28 2020

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

190 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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