Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care for them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

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There are many ways how one can express their feelings of love and affection. According to some, giving presents to their loved ones is

important but

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important, but

I strongly believe that there are different ways of expressing care.

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essay will discuss both the opinions in the subsequent paragraphs. Many instances on your

day

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day

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life require the need of your friends and family members. On one hand, it is always a great feeling to tell them how important they are to you.

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, you can always praise your mother when she cooks a good meal. Though all

day

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she spends taking care of the entire family without complaining, an expression of love once in a while will not hurt.

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, friends are those who help you when in need. In return, taking him out to his

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

restaurant or throwing surprise parties are some things that you can do from your end to show him that you care.

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, I believe that gifts are usually given during occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, weddings. It is more like a tradition

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being followed for years together now.

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, wedding receptions are organized more these days for friends as it is expected that there is going to be

exchange

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an exchange

of presents.

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instances can be more formal than personal. Though, some do believe that exchange of gifts is a genuine gesture so if it is done frequently

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the intensity of the bond will surely grow stronger. In conclusion,

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exchange

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the exchange

of presents is a thoughtful

endeavor

a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)

endeavour

however

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, it is confined to certain dates of the

year whereas

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year, whereas

love and affection can be transferred to your loved ones in other ways almost every

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