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Global warming is the biggest threat we are experiencing today? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The question of global warming has become one of the most controversial ones in recent decades. It is my firm belief that
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 environmental issue is may cause a great amount of danger not only to humanity, but to all the living creatures on the planet. It is the goal of
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 essay to analyse the problem of global warming by demonstrating points and supporting arguments. It should be
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 noted that global warming is the main cause of ice melting in the Antarctica, which leads to raise of the worldwide water level.
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, high levels of water would obviously be a huge danger to a plethora of animals and humans.
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 environmental disaster as flood may damage beaches, countrysides or even cities, treating an economical crisis to a great number of individuals.
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, flora and fauna of some regions might completely disappear, damaging a biodiversity of the planet.
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 concern related to global warming might probably be an emergence of deserts, which would damage a biosphere of the whole environment.
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 changes in nature could be fatal for some species, causing an increase of animal types in the list of endangered species.
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 phenomena would affect a food chain of the nature, worsening the situation enormously.
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, it may be concluded that the global warming is a catastrophic scene for the whole planet, which would have a negative impact on all the living creatures. I suppose that in order to prevent all the consequences everyone should be careful with the nature and take care of it.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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