Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion ?

As the technology is taking over the world by storm
,
Accept space
,
everything in the job industry is being extensively dependent on robots
.
Accept space
.
Thats
Suggestion
That's
being said
,
Accept space
,
some
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
hold an opinion that in the current future will be totally handled by machine
intelligence
.
Accept space
.
I
,
Accept space
,
however
,
Accept space
,
do not agree to
this
notion
.
Accept space
.
My inclination is justified
further
with
details
Suggestion
the details
.
Accept space
.
Allocating artificial
intelligence
to do all the
manufaturing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
and production related work in industries have surely many benefits to offer
.
Accept space
.
As safety of a mankind is being prime concern as people dealing with complex projects
,
Accept space
,
those machines
ceetainly
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
lower down the risk of accidents by working on behalf of humans.
Additionly
Suggestion
Additionally
,
Accept space
,
another advantage of using mechanical robots is their capacity to complete the multiple tasks in considerably lesser time than the
manforce
Suggestion
main force
man force
,
Accept space
,
resulting in a mass production and that too without a rest
.
Accept space
.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
as per the work culture rules
,
Accept space
,
human being is entitled to work only
untill
up to, before the time
until
8
hoirs
a period of time assigned for work
hours
to sustain their maximum capacity
.
Accept space
.
Whereas
,
Accept space
,
machines can do their duties without even needing a single rest or break
.
Accept space
.
Although
,
Accept space
,
the robots are surely taking over the majority of jobs
,
Accept space
,
there are
ceetain
definite but not specified or identified
certain
fields which
can not
can not
cannot
be replaced by them
.
Accept space
.
To articulate
,
Accept space
,
although
online learning
is being surfaced
Suggestion
has been surfaced
now than ever before
,
Accept space
,
the empathy and emotional experience the human teachers
potray
portray in words
portray
,
Accept space
,
is highly unlikely expected by the robots
.
Accept space
.
Also
,
Accept space
,
as it is all evident
,
Accept space
,
artificial
intelligence
or machines
,
Accept space
,
fundamentally needs to be programmed manually
,
Accept space
,
that
also
needs expert technicians
.
Accept space
.
Which
,
Accept space
,
in turn
,
Accept space
,
only
human
Suggestion
a human
can perform.
Also
,
Accept space
,
as the scientist have experimented already
,
Accept space
,
robots are
also
found quite a less reliable when it comes to perform the complex surgeries on living individual
.
Accept space
.
Hence
,
Accept space
,
medical field is
also
deoendent
relying on or requiring a person or thing for support, supply, or what is needed
dependent
dependant
solely on human doctors when it comes to health
.
Accept space
.
To sum up
,
Accept space
,
I would pen
down saying
Accept comma addition
down, saying
that in some of the professions in the world might end up replacing humans by artificial robots
.
Accept space
.
Although
,
Accept space
,
replacing the whole mankind with machinery
intelligence
seems completely illogical to me in the
forseeable
capable of being anticipated
foreseeable
future
.
Accept space
.
Submitted by zalak patel on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Improve your IELTS writing score within two weeks
Instantly see mistakes you've made and learn how to avoid them.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

What to do next:
Look at other essays:
The best new way to check your essay
Get 60% discount and enjoy a quick and easy way to check IELTS Writing Task 1&2!