Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion ?

#people #jobs #robots

As the technology is taking over the world by storm

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everything in the job industry is being extensively dependent on robots

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Thats

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That's

being said

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some

poeple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

hold an opinion that in the current future will be totally handled by machine

intelligence

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however

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do not agree to

this

notion

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My inclination is justified

further

with

details

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the details

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Allocating artificial

intelligence

to do all the

manufaturing

the act of making something (a product) from raw materials

manufacturing

and production related work in industries have surely many benefits to offer

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As safety of a mankind is being prime concern as people dealing with complex projects

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those machines

ceetainly

definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

certainly

lower down the risk of accidents by working on behalf of humans.

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another advantage of using mechanical robots is their capacity to complete the multiple tasks in considerably lesser time than the

manforce

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main force

man force

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resulting in a mass production and that too without a rest

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For instance

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as per the work culture rules

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human being is entitled to work only

untill

up to, before the time

until

hoirs

a period of time assigned for work

hours

to sustain their maximum capacity

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Whereas

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machines can do their duties without even needing a single rest or break

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Although

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the robots are surely taking over the majority of jobs

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there are

ceetain

definite but not specified or identified

certain

fields which

can not

cannot

be replaced by them

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although

online learning

is being surfaced

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has been surfaced

now than ever before

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the empathy and emotional experience the human teachers

potray

portray in words

portray

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is highly unlikely expected by the robots

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Also

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as it is all evident

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artificial

intelligence

or machines

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fundamentally needs to be programmed manually

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that

also

needs expert technicians

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in turn

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only

human

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a human

can perform.

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as the scientist have experimented already

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robots are

also

found quite a less reliable when it comes to perform the complex surgeries on living individual

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Hence

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medical field is

also

deoendent

relying on or requiring a person or thing for support, supply, or what is needed

dependent

dependant

solely on human doctors when it comes to health

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To sum up

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I would pen

down saying

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down, saying

that in some of the professions in the world might end up replacing humans by artificial robots

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Although

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replacing the whole mankind with machinery

intelligence

seems completely illogical to me in the

forseeable

capable of being anticipated

foreseeable

future

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