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These days, internet based courses have become a popular alternative to university based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others, however argue that it is important to stay at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In recent times,
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the internet
 has proliferated at an unprecedented rate. Owing to
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, a few individuals favours the idea of learning educational courses on the
internet
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, some argue that going to educational institution is more crucial. I opine that students ought to go to the academy for a better learning experience. On one hand, online classes are more desirable for many aspirants because these are more economical. There are many students who could not afford to seek higher students.
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, they drop out of their colleges.Learning through
internet
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 give them a chance to study in less money.
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, they can do any work simultaneously, which helps them to earn some extra to cover their expenditure.
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, in the UK, the majority of students do part time jobs in coffee shops or restaurants while studying online courses. Evidently,
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 notion gives them right to get educated like other students.
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, why attending educational institution is important is due to the fact that students have direct communication with their teachers on campuses. Students can clear their doubts more precisely and can understand complex concepts in the classes.
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, educational institution teaches some courses which require practical knowledge and practice which is only possible while sitting in the classes. .
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, a student who wants to become a nurse must attend college in order to pursue the practical knowledge.
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, university life play a vital role in the life of a learner. In conclusion,
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the internet
 has given freedom to students to learn with lesser money and time
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however I
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however, I
 opine that students must attend the academy for gaining skilful experience and better career prospects.
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