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It is said that music is important for bringing people together from different cultures and ages. Do you agree or disagree?

#music #people #cultures #ages
Although
 it is believed
music
 causes affection and sharing bonds, in many
situations struggles
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situations, struggles
 are as
main results
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the main results
 of differences between
musical tastes
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the musical tastes
 of age groups and cultural beliefs.
First
 of all, it has always been asserted by a handful of elders, nowadays the extraordinary pieces of rock
music
 are released much more than traditional ones. They are fans of easy listening and catchy tunes due to the kind of melody used in traditional
music
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music, although
although
 most of the times youth people are fond of rock or metal, because of drum and bass. As teenagers are recommended by
adults not
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adults, not
 to listen to harsh
music
, they might prefer not to spend time with parents and adults in order to hear what they would rather. Another issue worth discussing is the combination of events and cultural accidents in
lyrics
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the lyrics
. It is a great idea to compose a song for cultural consciousness-rising even though it may seem
insultation
 to a group of people. In
music
 videos,
for instance
, a handful of scenes can be shown and be trended provided that no racism or violence exist in.
there
Suggestion
There
 always have been talented and trained musicians who constantly had to deal with viewers’ strife because of utilizing a cultural story in their video and inevitably it could have not been omitted. In short,
music
 does not have a serious role in making people closer to each other
as a result
 of the composition of
lyrics
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the lyrics
 and cultural events.
Moreover
, people in different generations have different tastes of
music
 and do not come along with each other.
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