Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In my opinion living in a foreign
country
has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider I agree and slightly disagree with
this
statement.
Firstly
, for people who do not know
country's language
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the country's language
.
Much
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Many
more effects will be for people.
For instance
,
person
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a person
the person
wants
to begin
new life with agitation in
England but
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England, but
person
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the person
a person
does not know English, he will come across the problem of making new friends. These situations
may be cause
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may cause
people to feel alone and depressed, excluded from
she
of a female
her
local social life.
Secondly
, the practical problems. Maybe when you have
apply
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applied
to
doctor go shopping
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go doctor shopping
, eat out or the gratuity of police and festivals. At the beginning you can
nottake
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not take
part in these situations or these will be arise problems.
Furthermore
, none of these difficulties cause any serious issues because any language can be
learnt
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learned
with a little effort. Whereas you can quickly, fluently and without accents speak in abroad
country
in foreign languages than in your
country
. In effect,
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to
70 per cent
peaople
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
of the world know English or Russian surely not absolute.
Such
as the countries: Russian, England, Britain and China countries. It is my belief that the human is
great and perfect creation
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a great and perfect creation
of God.
That is
why in our universe does not have things that impossibly for humankind.
Conversely in
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Conversely, in
everyday life, I firmly believe that language difficulty can be solved with a significant amount of patience and time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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