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You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter •Tell them why you need to move the interview time •Ask to change the interview date •Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to apologise about the upcoming
interview
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 in the next couple of weeks at your company. On the date you arranged for my
interview
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, I have to attend an important meeting with the principal of my son for the
last
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 important exams in his high school. Since the school is so far from my place I cannot come back on the same day to come to your office for the
interview
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. First of all, I would like to show you how I am extremely excited about your invitation letter for my job application. Thank you a lot for giving me an opportunity to work in your organization. So I would be extremely grateful if you could arrange another day for me to be interviewed. I
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 wonder if my vacancy would be possible to
interview
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 online on that day if your schedule is full. Hopefully, I will receive your consideration for my requests. Thank you in advance for your assistance with
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 matter. Yours faithfully, My Hao

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coherence cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas more clearly with appropriate paragraphing. Each paragraph should present a single clear idea, leading the reader through your points systematically.
coherence cohesion
Ensure a clear logical structure by using linking words and phrases to guide the reader through your argument or explanation more effectively.
task achievement
Ensure that the reasons for rescheduling and your continued interest in the position are fully developed and expanded upon to better fulfill the task requirements.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable formal tone throughout the letter to reflect the professional context of the correspondence.
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