Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Throughout nowadays, there are a lot of choices in our life and all of them
are different kind
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are different in kind
. I
am agree
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agree
have agreed
with
this
point, I would say that it is a good thing to have the ability to choose from a wide variety. ‌
To begin
with the influence of the internet technical advance and globalization have eliminated
barries
a structure or object that impedes free movement
barriers
in international and transportation.
For example
, for young need more comfortable to change our future. In
this
century everything due to erudition. An example of
this
is that few graduates can choice the universities around the world. They have all
position
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positions
to educate. The high school students can choice the universities around the world.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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