Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being seld-employed?
Modern era
has shown a stupendous rise in demand of jobs. It is often seen that people prefer self financed job than to be employed under an organization. Suggestion
The modern era
This
essay will state the underlying reasons behind this
shift along with highlighting its possible corollaries.
There are myriad causes for earning money individually. The primary reason for that is
fear
of job. Suggestion
the fear
For example
, in India, many people lost there
jobs during Covid-19 pandemic and are now struggling to get back there. There only source of income was the salary provided by the company, which it has neglected to do so. of them or themselves
their
In addition
to this
, stress and workload can be considered as one of the important reasons for this
. For example
, TATA company
at Jamsedpur, fired an employee for not completing the Suggestion
a TATA company
accounts
stats on time.
Incidentally, the above reasons have a Suggestion
account
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
effects
on the masses. The most prominent impact of Suggestion
effect
this
is family crisis
. Suggestion
a family crisis
For instance
, if a person is having his own business, he fails to provide much time and attention to the close ones as he has to settle things at work first
. Another possible consequence could be major work load
. Considering a situation here, if a person is having a business, he has to provide salary to his employees. So, from head to toe, self earning person has immense work stress.
To conclude, fear and stress clearly stand out as the primary reasons for not being under someone's deskSuggestion
a major work load
(
Organization). The consequences of it which happens need to be carefully considered and watchfully monitored for its ill effects to be kept under check.Accept space
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite