Nowadays individuals behave in an antu society way, such as committing a crime. In general the soceity is to blame. What causes the antis-social behaviours of individuls? Who should be responsible for dealing with it?

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Despite the advent and advancement of technology certain individuals still display anti-social attitudes. The society takes the blame. I shall put forth the causes of
such
behaviour and ways it can be checked. Today, we live in an era of technology where the world has shrunk and become a global village. People communicate with one another connect freely over the Internet. Some people have more than enough bit greed and selfishness made their heart's desire more, making them engage in fraudulent activities on the web.
For instance
, a popular
influencer
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
on Twitter was apprehended by the police for
lothing
property that is leased or rented out or let
letting
loathing
people off their money she is still held in captivity.
Secondly
,
unmployment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
plays a pivotal role in making citizens, especially the youths
to behave
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behave
in an unacceptable way. When a graduate searches for a job and could not find one they become stressed and desperate, they would want to ease their lives, thereby engaging in activities that are against the norms of the society. Family plays an important role in the lives of everyone. It is the basic unit of learning for all as correction and adjustment start from the family. It is the duty of the parents to give and encourage their children on ways in which to behave
that is
good and acceptable. To illustrate
this
, when k was growing up, my mother counts the number of Apple in the fridge if anyone goes missing, she would reprimand myself and my siblings, she may decide not to give us dinner or other punishment. There is a popular saying that goes ”train up a child in a way that
isright
Suggestion
is right
so that when grows he might not depart from it”. Parents are solely responsible for reshaping society by putting the children on the right track.
Secondly
, it is the duty of the government to provide job opportunities for her citizens. Making provision for better schools, more job opportunities, encourages
individual
Suggestion
individuals
the individual
to work and better their lives and discourage them from activities that are anti-social. In conclusion, family and government can help put citizens on the right track if these steps are taken.
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