Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the danger of global warming?

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global warming has become a major concern

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resulting in several debates and facts that issue

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hardly finds

resources in developed countries for environmental problems

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this

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refers to the speaker or writer

will intent to examine the consequencesof global warming

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find the solution to (a problem or question) or understand the meaning of

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e solutions of these will be followed as measurements one the one hand , most of the compaines donot follow the environment rules and regulations they are careless in their outcomes can cause pollution and effect global warmig government should take severe action against them

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they can recycling process can help to reduce the problem apart from people should use public transport rather than own vehicles so that comsumption of fuel will be less used it will not effect environment

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, some folks are cutting trees for new projects `and forests are turning into developed countries so

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sake government should conduct campaingns to bring awareness in public for cutting trees people should pant more and more trees to save global warming whereas plants can observe carbondioxide and release life saving oxgyen i think government can focus on social media platforms

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instagram, facebook ,whatsup, radio and television can bring alot of change in peoples life in conclusion ,i think developed countries should take a step forward to save global warming by following rules and regulations and by joining hands together can lead to defeat

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problem as well as save world for better

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greenhouse gas emissions
carbon footprint
renewable energy
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extreme weather conditions
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