The rise of convinience foods has helped people keep up the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, in order to allow people be in

time

everywhere in

this

rush age

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production of easy prepared groceries is increasing rapidly.

Although

this

occurrence

seem

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seems

to be indispensable in the modern world, it has considerable drawbacks. So, I think

this

is disadvantageous change. These days,

time

is the one of еру most valuable things, which can be saved by convenience foods. Because, their making process completes quickly

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without requiring huge effort.

Consequently

, there will be more

time

to work or to spend with family and friends.

For instance

, according to my own experience, my parents are busy almost every

time

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so, they do not prefer to pass

time

by cooking home prepared foods.

Additionally

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apart from speed, these foods save money. Because, apparently, their cost is very low, considering their quality. So these are the main benefits of

this

development.

However

, there are still some inevitable downsides. The main problem is that these foods damage health very much

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because they contain harmful chemical ingredients, which are used to make foods able to not be deteriorated for a long

time

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To illustrate, according to experts, the vast amount of easily prepared foods

contain

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contains

GMO

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which means

genetically modified organism

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a genetically modified organism

. As it name refers, these foods’ structures are changed in order to upgrade it.

Moreover

, these additives improve the appearance and taste of food,

therefore

it attracts people to purchase it.

Also

, it is obvious that

main reason

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the main reason

of food’s consumption is to supply energy and nutrients

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and

this

can not

cannot

be approached by eating convenience groceries. Because, they do not contain essential elements and vitamins. So, these are the main drawbacks. To conclude, amount of different convenience foods is growing significantly, to keep up to the modern life.

This

development has more negative impacts, as it is better to save health rather than striving to be on

time

everywhere.

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The rise of convinience foods has helped people keep up the speed of the modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Your opinion

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