The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010
The layout shows the
road
access to the city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. City hall in the year 2007, was surrounded by a ring
road
with
hospital
Correct article usage
a hospital
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road
connected to it on the south.On the hospital
road
, they are six bus
stop's
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stops
stop
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with three on the west side and the other three on the east side.On the west
side
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,side
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the car park for staff and the public is attached to the bust stop's
on
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in
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the eastern direction to ring
road
connected to it and the hospital
road
connects with
city
Correct article usage
the city
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road
on the south.
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  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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