In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In many countries, the number of people who become obese have up surged at a great pace causing health condition and fitness level to decline.

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had arisen

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problem. The overweight

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causes

many inconveniences to the people in their daily life.

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and foremost,

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the reason

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in many countries the grocery items

are very much expensive and due to

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are very much expensive and due to this individual avoiding

are very much expensive and due to this individual avoided

are very much expensive and due to this individual avoid

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individual avoid to buying the items and prefer consuming junk food.

For instance

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, a research concluded by some scientist stated that the junk foodstuffs are very

unhealth

not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind

unhealthy

and very harmful for the human

body

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, there are many working-class people who usually do overtime to earn some more amount of money and due to

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they forget to take care of their

body

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and become fat and afterwards they do not like to go to

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the gym

a gym

because of their asymmetric

body

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the other hand, to handle

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type of situation government should put heavy taxes on the junk foods.

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people will avoid buying these stuffs and will buy some good feeds.

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, the people should only think that they have to intake less calorie diet and

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they should prefer some sports like gymnastics, swimming and so on to keep their

body

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healthy and fit. To conclude, it is true that many people nowadays are suffering from obesity due to

unhealthy lifestyle

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an unhealthy lifestyle

unhealthy lifestyles

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individual including

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individual, including

riding bicycles to

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the nearest

place or prefer walking

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of driving.