In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In many countries, the number of people who become obese have up surged at a great pace causing health condition and fitness level to decline.
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in many countries the grocery items are very much expensive and due to
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individual avoid to buying the items and prefer consuming junk food. For instance
, a research concluded by some scientist stated that the junk foodstuffs are very unhealth
and very harmful for the human not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
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body
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, there are many working-class people who usually do overtime to earn some more amount of money and due to this
they forget to take care of their body
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people will avoid buying these stuffs and will buy some good feeds. In addition
, the people should only think that they have to intake less calorie diet and finally
they should prefer some sports like gymnastics, swimming and so on to keep their body
healthy and fit.
To conclude, it is true that many people nowadays are suffering from obesity due to unhealthy lifestyle
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