In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In many countries, the number of people who become obese have up surged at a great pace causing health condition and fitness level to decline.
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This
essay will discuss why
this
problem
have arisen
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has arisen
had arisen
and will discuss some steps to cope up with
this
problem. The overweight
cause
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causes
many inconveniences to the people in their daily life.
First
and foremost,
reason
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the reason
for
that is
in many countries the grocery items
are very much expensive and due to
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are very much expensive and due to this individual avoiding
are very much expensive and due to this individual avoided
are very much expensive and due to this individual avoid
this
individual avoid to buying the items and prefer consuming junk food.
For instance
, a research concluded by some scientist stated that the junk foodstuffs are very
unhealth
not in or exhibiting good health in body or mind
unhealthy
and very harmful for the human
body
.
Secondly
, there are many working-class people who usually do overtime to earn some more amount of money and due to
this
they forget to take care of their
body
and become fat and afterwards they do not like to go to
gym
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the gym
a gym
because of their asymmetric
body
.
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On
the other hand, to handle
this
type of situation government should put heavy taxes on the junk foods.
due
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Due
to
this
people will avoid buying these stuffs and will buy some good feeds.
In addition
, the people should only think that they have to intake less calorie diet and
finally
they should prefer some sports like gymnastics, swimming and so on to keep their
body
healthy and fit. To conclude, it is true that many people nowadays are suffering from obesity due to
unhealthy lifestyle
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an unhealthy lifestyle
unhealthy lifestyles
. As many things can be done by the
individual including
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individual, including
riding bicycles to
the near
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the nearest
place or prefer walking
instead
of driving.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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